Please compare E-mail A with E-mail B, and comment...

Please compare E-mail A with E-mail B, and comment on both of them. Then, revise your favorite one for effectiveness. Rewrite or add any information if necessary. E-mail A Dear Ms Wang I have been asked by Mr John Fillmore to write to you to ask you if you could supply us with some of the special white cotton materials you supplied us with last year. I can’t remember what he said it was called, but no doubt you will remember anyway. I think we will want about 5,000 metres if the price is right. If we needed more, would we be able to have it？ Can you let us know as soon as you possibly can whether or not we can have it. If we can’t Mr Fillmore will go elsewhere. Hope you are keeping well. Yours faithfully E-mail B Dear Ms Wang We would like to purchase a further quantity of the white fur you supplied us with last year, subject to a satisfactory price being agreed. The Order Number for this was 32323 and the material was called“ Pure White”. We require approximately 5,000 metres of the cotton, although we need to know whether we would be able to obtain more if necessary. The price last year was $3.00 a metre. Would you be able to offer us the same terms？ Perhaps you would be kind enough to let us know if you can supply us with this cotton material, how much is available, the price per metre, and when delivery would take place. Yours sincerely Sara Hope